This issue is caused by the style file. The style does not render on the map view in ArcGIS Pro (only in the preview pane). It is recommended to use ArcGIS Pro to test the style as a Dictionary Renderer to verify that the Dictionary and Symbols are authored correctly to use in the dictionary renderer.
1. No text appears inside the circle:
The cause of this issue is the omission of appending the text at the end of the Dictionary Script.
Change the end of the script to the following:
```
keys += ';TEXT';
return keys;
```
2. The colors of the stick are not correct; it should be Green/Green, Red/Red.
The cause of this issue is the way the symbol is authored in the style file. The Marker layer has 'Rotate Clockwise' checked while the line layer does not, which causes the layers to rotate in opposite directions.